Sunday, December 11, 2011

When Im All Alone Comments

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When I am all alone and all is quiet my mind drifts slowly away.
Walking the halls of my past, memories fill my tired worn flask.
Alone with my thoughts, the wrongs and rights, places a child once played.
I remember the dream's of a young lass, searching for love that will long last.
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Sara Fielder 04 January 2012

You have captured alone-ness here perfectly!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 19 December 2011

life's memories are flashing back when you are alone and quiet this happens to many of us and it is nice thouhg that we are reminded of it because of this poem (just be careful with using 's when you make words plural)

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jack green

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