Thursday, June 26, 2008

When I Will Be Dead Comments

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When I would hear how nice person I was?
When I would find out that I was loved by so many?
Would I have to wait?
To find it, when I will be dead.
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Jay P Narain
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Andrew Lockley 26 June 2008

I liked your poem, you got the message across that death is inevitable but nobody wishes for it, but that its not all sad as you will go to heaven :) good poem :)

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