Monday, December 14, 2015

When I Was (Your) Alice Comments

Rating: 4.6

You invited me for tea round your house
Hesitation...
but no trepidation
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Violetta Violetta
COMMENTS
Roseann Shawiak 16 January 2016

Remembering when and the reasons why you're not still together, a lifelong progression as we meet others along the way and relate in different ways together. Wonderful poem of remembering! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Manonton Dalan 21 December 2015

reminiscing romantic moments

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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2015

A loss of fascination over time in a relationship once cherished and wholeheartedly desired, well depicted in the poem. Beautiful love poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned from the heart with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience and voyage of bliss that affects one profoundly, especially when it's a mutual natural affinity. It is also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if not carefully nurtured at all time to maintain it bliss. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Violetta. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 December 2015

thanks for sharing your first 2 poems, Violetta.. Keep on writing/posting.. :)

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