When I Was Young Poem by Apple Jean Barcena

When I Was Young

Rating: 3.3


When I was young, life seemed so light,
I thought everything would turn out right.
I spent my days just running around,
Playing with friends, no worries to be found.

But as the days and years went by,
Life got harder, and I wondered why.
Unexpected things came along the way—
That's when I started to learn each day.

Back in elementary, I had many friends,
And I believed those bonds would never end.
But time revealed a different truth—
Not all friendships last from youth.

It's sad to think, but sometimes it's real—
The ones you value might not feel what you feel.
You start to wonder and quietly cry,
Asking yourself, "But why, oh why? "

Even if they didn't stay till the end,
I still think of them as more than pretend.
They were part of my story, part of my past,
And those memories, to me, will always last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvin Banggollay 26 June 2008

yeah sometimes life is full of suprises and things we could hardly understand.. But every events that happend in our life exist for a reasons...Well keep penning for i can see you have a soul of a poet... well, pahabol, may BF ka na ba he he he... ingat, melvin

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Apple Jean L. Aba 26 June 2008

pag sure dinha oi God Bless

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emmanuelle sanders 21 July 2008

wow! ayos ah! i like it! keep it up! :) - ellie s.

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Apple Jean L. Aba 02 July 2008

hey! good pm to all!

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Marvin Brato 01 July 2008

Another good poem, with lessons to learn fro everyday life! A 10.

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Egi David Perdana 27 June 2008

I'm young and I know this poem very special for all broken heart in the world

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Ency Bearis 27 June 2008

nice poem...keep up the good work Best Regards, Ency Bearis

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