Friday, November 20, 2009

When I Was With You Comments

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When I was with you
all i am was seen through your eyes
but you left
then I found out there was so much more to me
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Cheri Michelle
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Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Coming of age once you are out of somebody's shadow is nice. It is exhillirating when you realise your true potential. Very nice poem.

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Shelly Shelly 20 November 2009

well written very expressive..

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