Monday, September 7, 2015

When I Was Introduced To Love Comments

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I had thought love is a play of life!
Alas! Could not see the sharp blade knife!
Love! You made me so much fragile,
What I was! Just a beautiful tile,
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Valsa George 11 September 2015

You are travelling on the wheels of love's chariot! What a fantastic take off!

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Charity Nduhiu 10 September 2015

This was a nice introduction to love. Sweet one

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Bisma Mirza 08 September 2015

amazing one really! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10.............

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

Love has wonderful role in life definitely and this makes mind fragile. Love whispers through sweet songs. Love is definitely sweet heart that flies in mind. So amazing poem shared...10

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 September 2015

An amazing imagery, yes he'll go back........................................10

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