When I Was Infatuated In Class Eighth... Comments

Simplicity of diction and lucid treatment of an adolescent's mental state makes poem a worth read...

CEO OF BANK OF POETRY She calls me my salaams lady friend I stand on the rivers bend anyday the tsunami may take me away till such a time a banker still consider me if you will sisss misss or friendsss.... Poetry along with me shall not ever end sometimes when we are very young we get so very scared will she love me will she report me what will she do no one ever knew it's all in a woman's mind to love or to be kind but in memories we alone have she has made us lose our mind and an opportunity we all leave far behind in the annals of time call it infatuation if you may

What a great poem! Incredibly written. I'm sure you wished you'd responded though. Congrats on being chosen as poem of the day. Well deserved!

electrified and charged for lifetime

Nicely written poem on infatuation, at that age most of the students go thru the same phase...Thanks for sharing.

Ah, young love (or as you correctly call it, infatuation) . Well written and congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

Lovely poem. That sweet adolescent time is precious and your display of one small yet memorable event and the tender feelings that arise in an innocent heart is beautiful.

Good to see this poem on the facebook page of poemhunter.. Well done Mahfooz

wow, what a lovely poem! Congrats on being poet of the day! May the memory of this day also burn forever in your soul...

The beauty of love! Touching the heart so deep. Nice work.

There is no dearth of encounters of a similar nature around us but the way you have nuanced the incident has made it incredibly adorable. Thanks, Mahfooz.

Her beauty burned forever in my mind...The power of beauty is definitely undeniable. A beautiful expression of feelings written with clarity and candor.

hey! who has voted me 8? u r requested to pen comment also.......hehehehehe