Thursday, February 18, 2010

When I Was Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

The wind whispers sweet nothings in my ear,
The rain pours down on my head slowly,
Even God sheds an occasional tear.
The body becomes weak,
...
Read full text

Denice Woods
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

A beautiful poem, with excellent flow of words like a natural stream. Life is like a river, Flowing into death's eternal sea, Wonderful observation. The pebbles it collects on the way, will not be with it for ever, will lie on the sea bed at some point in time. God alone can judge me, When my time has come. Faith in God helps to go on, when the going is tough.

0 0 Reply
Dulakshi Wakista 25 February 2010

beautiful flow write.Well done.Keep on writing.

0 0 Reply
Denice Woods

Denice Woods

Philadelphia
Close
Error Success