Monday, December 30, 2013
When I Was A King Comments
Rating: ★5.0
These I kingdoms that once I owned.
Trumpets and drums were played before I enter.
Attendants march behind until I reach the throne.
Almighty! King Arthur! It's all I remember.
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Aswath Raman
30 December 2013
This is an impressive write. Though, I felt you could edit out some words, poem conveyed what it should!
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7/19/2025 9:49:08 PM # 1.0.0
Hi Rohan, I agree with Aswath's comment....a little polish required, and once again, watch the tenses. However, all in all, a very good write! Cheers!