Wednesday, June 15, 2011
When I Want, I Can Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Don't fall, stay strong,
Try your best, believe in 'you'.
If you are told you are wrong,
Give it another try, it will do.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
15 June 2011
The poem is extremely didactic in nature. It has a very strong structure. Plenty of useful advice are here to shape your life. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing.....
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7/24/2025 8:35:02 PM # 1.0.0
the abab...classical theme is quite well doen the rhymes work very well u hv a nice piece there :) cheers