When I'Ve Been Wrong Comments

I really liked this poem, it shows alot of feeling and true knowlage about hurt and pain that everyone has to get through some time in their life.

strong words. wonerfully written. if i feel a connection as i read, it's a wonderfully overwhelming beautiful poem.

this is a good emotional write, but maybe instead of focusing on the rhyme scheme focus on the flow, add some extra juicy words and this poem will command the attention you're looking to gain

This is really good, Atara. Thanks for sharing.