Thursday, July 5, 2018

When I Turn This Place Over To You Comments

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One day when the sky has gone grey,
my body will drop like a fly's
to it's grave
I'll even bless Mother Earth then.
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Chuy Amante
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

Mother Earth always blesses us. Time impacts on life and death comes as truth at end. We accept this. Our bodies lie in surface of Earth. Tending towards the garden of mother Earth is wise act and feeling love is nice. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Red Soul 05 July 2018

I wish more people cared about Mother Nature. We would have had a far better life. Your poem is beautiful. I loved the lines in the 2nd stanza - 'When I leave... creating/life'.... Thanks for sharing.

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