Monday, November 18, 2013

When I Think Of You Comments

Rating: 3.0

Your eyes, like a pearl,
Shining when we play,
Your adorable head looking, straight at me.
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Goldheart Bird
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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2017

A nice poem that shows the poet's deep love for her pet. Loved the love expressed through the lines of this poem.

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Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

A very lovely poem. I have cat as well. He is the first to wake. Well done. Bien!

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Bri Edwards 18 December 2013

Allison, i couldn't decide if this sounded like a poem or a nice non-poetic story of love for your bird. i have decided that it DOES qualify as a poem, and, even if it did not, i would (and shall) add it to MyPoemList. so THERE! hopefully you will (if you wish to) find a human partner some day who you will love at least almost as much, and who WON'T MAKE A MESS or DANGLE FROM YOUR HAIR. but probably will sleep in late some days. thanks for sharing. :) Y.M.

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Beach Girl 18 November 2013

You really have a cute way of expressing your feelings Goldheart B. One thing, you might want to change 'furry; ' friend to 'feathery' friend. I'm pretty sure birds don't have fur. I enjoyed that poem very much!

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