Tuesday, October 21, 2008

When I Think Of You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf

Everywhere white snow
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Emma Adamyan 26 June 2009

wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 06 February 2009

wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem

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Shabre Moore 21 January 2009

that's jus totally beautiful i realy do like it

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Caroline Weeks 29 October 2008

So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.

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Pure Remedy 24 October 2008

AWW THAT IS TO SWEET! .. I LIKE

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Bobbie Mcnay 24 October 2008

that is preety i liked it. you asked to read it so i did and i liked it

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Leon & Sarah Harris 23 October 2008

Amir, how sad and lovely write my heart melts the grieft....and my mind lefted up for you...nice one.

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Carol Rhodes 23 October 2008

PERSIAN, MAY LOVE BE ALL YOU WANT AND EXPECT IT TO BE. SUCH A TENDER, CARING, WARM CONNECTION TO THE HEART AND NATURE, THIS POEM. MAY LOVE BE YOUR REWARD FOR ALL TIME! THANK YOU, CAROL

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Tsira Goge 23 October 2008

Very air and heavenly poems. Do not miss a nightingale sometimes autumn blossom more beautifully... 10... Tsira

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Janice Etienne 22 October 2008

this makes me happy it's really pleasent

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Rosan Sadir 22 October 2008

It is a lovely insight of words and is pieced together beautifully

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Lindsey Ashton 22 October 2008

nice poem, nicley written

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Sarah Abdullah 22 October 2008

Everywhere white snow My heart burns the grief I just Love how your Images can be related to other things Sooo Easily good one

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M M 22 October 2008

A lovely poem in which the metaphor of automn brings a new sight of the self :) 10!

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Sandra Fowler 22 October 2008

Brief, but beautiful. A fine lyric piece. l0 from me. Warm regards, Sandra

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Thad Wilk 22 October 2008

A touching poem - of love! Great read Shiraz! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 21 October 2008

Well written poem expressing thoughts of autumn colours, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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