Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf
Everywhere white snow
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wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem
So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.
that is preety i liked it. you asked to read it so i did and i liked it
Amir, how sad and lovely write my heart melts the grieft....and my mind lefted up for you...nice one.
PERSIAN, MAY LOVE BE ALL YOU WANT AND EXPECT IT TO BE. SUCH A TENDER, CARING, WARM CONNECTION TO THE HEART AND NATURE, THIS POEM. MAY LOVE BE YOUR REWARD FOR ALL TIME! THANK YOU, CAROL
Very air and heavenly poems. Do not miss a nightingale sometimes autumn blossom more beautifully... 10... Tsira
It is a lovely insight of words and is pieced together beautifully
Everywhere white snow My heart burns the grief I just Love how your Images can be related to other things Sooo Easily good one
A lovely poem in which the metaphor of automn brings a new sight of the self :) 10!
Brief, but beautiful. A fine lyric piece. l0 from me. Warm regards, Sandra
A touching poem - of love! Great read Shiraz! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Well written poem expressing thoughts of autumn colours, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!