Tuesday, January 13, 2009

When I Think Of Daddy Comments

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When i think of daddy
i listen 2 his favorite music
close my eyes nd sing along
try not 2 think of him being gone
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Nia Riz 27 January 2009

the poem was really good and interesting...but i feel poets shouldnt change the beautiful english language and its spelling! ...so it might be better if you made it proper

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~ Jon London ~ 13 January 2009

such a heart felt touch to this poem....deeply written and composed...this was written with tears....lovely thanks for sharing Jon

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