When I think I am happy,
I know that I am not happy.
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When you think you are not a poet Others think you're a poet....! Keep writing!
We all think to much...smiles be intresting to see more poems from you = }
I really enjoyed this...nice style you have....but...you are not human, you only think you are...blessings
You've spent a lot of time thinking... it's a good pastime.
if you have to think about it then you are trying to hard to get it. all these things should flow naturally to you and through you like poetry.
As a part of our station in life we are blessed with a certainty above all else. That certainty is that each and every one of us is a valid point of view. No point of view is more valid than another. There are only different angles or fields of perceptics perhaps.... But each is valid. With that in mind, my point of view says you have written a very fine poem that can stir some conversation. I happen to like that. Thanks for the invite......Jim Troy
you wrote the truth.. life is made up of all ups and downs of live...we we are neither happy nor sad etc....poor does not mean money only..we are poor in some way or another
you wrote the truth.. life is made up of all ups and downs of live...we we are neither happy nor sad etc....poor does not mean money only..we are poor in some way or another
thats a thought to be pondered about......keep trying to put more feelings and u will grow as a poet.......
AHHH VERY TRUE WHEN WE THINK OF SOMETHING THE REAL OPPOSITE IS WHAT REALLY IS GOING ON FOR OUR MIND WILL ALWAYS OPPOSE WHAT IS HAPPENING FOR US TO MOVE ON
u write reality...plain reality...and ther's truth! ! !
Another great write - well done you.