When I Think He Thinks With Me (Being Inspired By Dr. Antony Theodore's Poem "Calling The One Who Has No Name") Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When I Think He Thinks With Me (Being Inspired By Dr. Antony Theodore's Poem "Calling The One Who Has No Name")

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Why I think I should be good and I should do something good?
Why I think I should not be bad and I should not do anything bad?
I am a human being with so many instincts,
and every instinct excites me for a specific desire,
often I become a victim of my desires!
Why I regret my sin when I willfully commit it?
Why I think my sin should not be recurred?
Who is this making me restless on my misdeeds?
Who is this attempting to make a human being an Angel?
Is he a lovely friend who leaves me alone in my weak moments?
Why comes back when the weak moment is passed?
Who is this, inspiring me to balance a misdeed by a good deed?
Why my balancing good deed makes me peaceful?
Is there someone in me who thinks with me?
If I exist because I think,
someone also exists because he thinks with me.
But I don't know who this wonderful and faithful friend is?
A nameless friend who deserves all the good names!

Monday, April 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: someone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2018

Who is this making me restless on my misdeeds? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 May 2018

A number of questions asked to your own psyche are indeed difficult to answer because there are so many unforced errors that go without control many times out of ignorance! However, the answer to your existence is pertinently stated through the line, 'someone also exists because he thinks with me'......your nameless friend in the form of eternal self! It's a fabulous poem! I have not yet read Dr. Antony's poem but I presume, you have explored the theme of another excellent poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 April 2018

A wonderful and thought provoking poem that captures the power and goodness of the Almighty. Liked the beautiful thoughts embedded in this poem.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2018

I am a human being with so many instincts, and every instinct excites me for a specific desire, often I become a victim of my desires! Why I regret my sin when I willfully commit it? ..... so touching and true. A brilliant poem inspired by Dr. Antony has been presented startlingly.10

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