When I Think Comments

Girls of your age are not expected to do much of pensive thinking, but I am glad that you do it. And when you do it, you have beautifully described what you see and feel about life. 'the sun opens up'and gets warmer.' 'the clouds move slower' 'the trees whoosh quietly.' 'the book opens up' 'the grass grows greener.' 'Birds sing quietly' - Are some of the things that happen when you 'think of my life'. These are nice, poetic thoughts. Best wishes, keep writing!

Evelina. Another fantastic write, your material just keeps getting better and better my friend. i will be back to your site that a for sure. your friend in poetry Barbie