Tuesday, October 9, 2018

When I Shall No Longer Be... Comments

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The sea-waves break against the cliffs,
Like thoughts against my skull;
The sea-gulls squawk inside my heart:
‘There was so much madness in love! ' she says.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Mahtab Bangalee 18 October 2018

wonderful Dramatic Monologue /// lovely penned

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2018

Dream and love associate with mind with amazing feelings. The sea-waves break against the cliffs and thoughts against skull arise. Inner melody with natural perception sings for long time. An interesting poem is excellently penned.10

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Kostas Lagos 09 October 2018

I think it's one of your best - if not the best!

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M Asim Nehal 09 October 2018

Awesome....What a wonderful poem, MP, loved it. I quote: 10++++++++ I am old, but you are growing Younger—and younger, in my memory.

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