When I See Them Fly I Will Feel You Near Comments

i sent this to MyPoemList. great fitting of words together with rhyming and reason. i especially enjoyed Caress the leaves from the trees. thanks for sharing. bri :)

One thing I know and will hold so dear When I see them fly I will feel you near Beautiful! The breeze, the caressed leaves, the birds high above, their soft, swift wings, their graceful descent, songs of special love, heaven sent message and, the last but not the least, 'When I see them fly I will feel you near ' feeling have so nicely been crafted and depicted that one can almost 'touch and feel' these. A masterpiece!

great write a heart sounding one