Wednesday, April 8, 2015

When I Saw The Two Of Them Comments

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When I saw the two of them
Sitting on the beach together
And him examining her breasts
As though they were a specimen
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Raymond Farrell
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Melvina Germain 07 October 2015

I'm sure I know people like this, perhaps the time came finally and no inhibitions entered in. This poem perhaps entices one to think of their own situations...Excellent poem.....

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2015

Copulation. Nice work.

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Raymond Farrell

Raymond Farrell

Perth, Ontario
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