A boiling, hot summers day was when I saw her
she had lovely, straight, blonde hair
i couldn`t help but gaze a stare
her beautiful blue eyes lit up brightly in the sun
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As a dear old friend of mine would have said about those two last lines, Of their brilliance, miracle of
Did you find out her name? Did you talk to her? If not, fat chance of having your dream come true, but I wish you the best. Congrats on Poem of the Day.!
How sweet! Prayers are often answered. I hope this is one as such! Thanks for sharing and also...congrats on being chon as 'poem of the day'...well-deserved!
A moment in time, screaming with possibilities, captured in verse.
Great Poem Ricky. Love the adjectives you chose to use. Always, Linda
I pray she looks at you kindly - brilliant and pleasant reading. topten i say
God, i can even picture that girl! ! I love the way you describe that girl in your dream. Very well written
A great job of placing so much feeling in a very short amount of lines. great job
You deserve to get her. Nice writing, it flowed, held my attention. xx
Concerning those last two lines O their brilliance, miracle of (George Oppen)