When I Saw Her. Comments

Concerning those last two lines O their brilliance, miracle of (George Oppen)

As a dear old friend of mine would have said about those two last lines, Of their brilliance, miracle of

Of your brilliance, miracle of

Did you find out her name? Did you talk to her? If not, fat chance of having your dream come true, but I wish you the best. Congrats on Poem of the Day.!

Short and sweet, congrats and on getting poem of the day!

A short but powerful poem of desire

How sweet! Prayers are often answered. I hope this is one as such! Thanks for sharing and also...congrats on being chon as 'poem of the day'...well-deserved!

Short and sweet. May the dreams become reality.

cute poem. good job.

A moment in time, screaming with possibilities, captured in verse.

Great Poem Ricky. Love the adjectives you chose to use. Always, Linda

I pray she looks at you kindly - brilliant and pleasant reading. topten i say

hey ricky...ur poem is juss beautiful..well done.

God, i can even picture that girl! ! I love the way you describe that girl in your dream. Very well written

A great job of placing so much feeling in a very short amount of lines. great job

You deserve to get her. Nice writing, it flowed, held my attention. xx