Saturday, August 18, 2012

When I Pray Comments

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When I pray,
I pray for the last dropp of snow
For the cute little button on the young doe's nose
For the last drip of chocolate on the mixing spoon
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Francisca Darko
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 September 2012

Sweet prayer poem n adorable what u pray for in poetry. Esp lovd how u ended it. :)

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Godfrey Morris 20 August 2012

This is an inspiring write. It was enchanting at the begining then became more reflective at the end. I think this is your best write so far. Great potential you have at such a young age.

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