When I Posted My First Lines... Comments

woooooooooooo! this is yr wonderful poetry i did not notice earlier, i love it... great keep going...

a beautiful poem Jasmeen. writing is a passion. we are born to write.

Put d experience so pleasantly..., . Cud feel as my own...nice

i am feeling just as you depicted here in your poem. love this poem. thanks 4 sharing.

It is lovely if someone can relate to our words, however I say we write because it is good to air our what is in our brain and I got to the point too, that I know only those people will read it, who has to learn something from these words. Remember like people attracts each other, to walk in life's road together and help each other. Your writing is just lovely, shows who you are, a very sensitive, lovely person.

We all felt the same way, your heart talks here Jasmeen. Great poem. Siya_! !

When first itself burst then what you got the lucid thought Allah ki marji hai

The first step into the unknown can be intimidating and it may falter too! But if we keep moving, we gradually gain confidence and the first shouts of 'hurrah' will help us gain momentum and under new inspiration, we won't even hesitate to take a headlong plunge! A great write Jasmeen.....which has come from the heart!

Straight from the heart. Keep your poems flowing Jasmeen, they are lovely

Every line expresses a feeling of the heart. First line to the last line. Thank you.

First step always look hard to take, but once u took, more ways automatically opened for u, if u r courageous & pure by heart, as for as ur personality concern, u r outstanding poetess sister, thanks to share ur poetry...well expressed

Anything that is maiden will be surrounded by uncertainties well expressed feelings. I really enjoyed the write..

Holy Qur'an,16: 125, tells us to invite the uncouth with rational and intelligent thoughts.Discussions are possible in a cool atmosphere.54: 17,22,32, and40 tell to read the Qur'an and think on it.12: 111 tells to those who think there is good lesson and it becomes a guide.Let the believer poets use their power to improve the social culture progressively to a peaceful level(Islam) .Insha Allah. May Allah teach his children to teach and get educated both materially and spiritually.May your words be blessed by Him. It is simple and nice.