Tuesday, January 21, 2014

When I Parted From You Comments

Rating: 3.5

The relationship has grown stale gum
tears will not stop flowing from the eyes
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Basant Swain
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Bernard Kennedy 22 January 2014

Very real and human, beautifully expressing a painful reality with hope.

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Sarojini Pattayat 21 January 2014

nice and touching poem.Really wonderful.words chosen are appropriate. happy writing

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Gajanan Mishra 21 January 2014

vow to live and die with the gap, wonderful. I like it.

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