Thursday, June 26, 2014

<≪≪ When I Miss You (Song) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I miss you
I tell the clouds to take the form of you
Before we sit face to face
From nowhere a howling wind cuts in
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

nicely worded song. you need someone to set it to music. iy would be awesome.

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Harindhar Reddy 27 June 2014

What a nice way to wish your beloved to be happy (somebody whom you like) . All images and metaphors you draw between human and nature gelled well as if you were painting natural landscape in the mind. Lovely impressive song by you. Awesome work!

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Harindhar Reddy 27 June 2014

What a nice way to wish your loved to be happy (may your love) . All images and metaphors you draw between human and nature gelled well as if you are painting natural landscape in the mind. Lovely impressive song by you. Awesome work!

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