When I Met You Comments

(cont.) ...re the last stanza: i like to capitalize the seasons' names; i think teachers taught me to do so. so BRI would use Spring. and i'd use disappeared to 'stay in the past tense for verbs'. but, OTHERWISE, it is a very nice poem. who's the lucky person/fellow? or did this (mostly) all come from your imagination? to MyPoemList. chamber music is nice. bri :)

Where nothing stirred within...........i know your meaning, but it would be even clearer (TO ME) if you added something, like once (in front of nothing, and probably deleted within. hmm? (cont.) ...

So sweet and fascinating portrayal of how love brings about a complete transformation within a man or a woman showering happiness all the way. Thanks for sharing.