Friday, June 5, 2009

When I Met You Comments

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when i first met you i thought 'what a fool'
when i started to know you i begun to find you cool
when we became close i started to care
when we became lovers i couldnt imagine
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stacie jessica peters
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Konstantin Filipov 15 July 2010

With only a few sentences you have captured the whole life of a relationship. You poem starts as a relationship - beautiful and full of hope, but it just collapses with time. A wonderful job, thanks for sharing!

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Tiffany Jade Stedman 01 September 2009

thats bootiful stacie ily xxxx

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