Sunday, May 15, 2011

When(I'M Without You, With You Is Where I'D Rather Be.) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I close my eyes, you're the first thing that I see.
When I think, you're the first thing that I think of.
When I smile, you're the immediate suspect of the deed.
When I dream, you're what I always hope to dream of.
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Samuel finley
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Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ...

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