Thursday, May 1, 2008

When I'M With You Comments

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The beauty of the ocean
Could never compare -
To the beauty I find
In the sea of your eyes.
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Mark Sebert
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Roseann Shawiak 24 September 2014

Very good poem with great rhythm - beautiful imagery! ! Thank you, RoseAnn

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very nice and awesome poem..good job

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Tabitha Moreland 15 May 2008

Your ability with words is overwhelming Although all of them are beautiful, this one is my absolute favorite of the poems you wrote me. It always makes me realize what an awesome guy I have. ~your Tabba

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Evaughn Gray 06 May 2008

wow this one was also very beautiful i loved the way u described what she is to you..it was wonderful~Hazel

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Newport News, Virginia
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