Friday, July 7, 2006

When I’m The Happiest Man Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always find myself laughing
In the hour of marvelous confusion
Walking somewhere in the sunlight
With no real destination
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ernestine Northover 07 July 2006

And why not Uriah, these things are what makes life interesting and takes us away from the humdrum norm. Delcious write. Lovely read. Love Ernestine XXX

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what an optimistic outlook, Uriah. the first stanza is immaculate and the strongest i feel in the piece. it set the tone for the rest and really captured the waking moment beautifully. mighty fine work here. Jake

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Sandra Fowler 07 July 2006

You have seen something beautiful from your window on the world today. Great poem, Uriah! Warm regards, Sandra

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***** ********* 07 July 2006

Wow! Uriah, this is a different poet to when I first met you indeed. A great uplifting poem, so breezy it almost lifted their skirts! lol What am I like? lol It is the effect of your poem on me you happy poet you. Thanks for sharing, smiling, half mast in respect today. Tai

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