When I'M Sixty Four Comments

David - Kid stuff! My girlfriend Anna Busby, a pearl harbor survivor is now 93, and still as active as ever! See my 'Secret of Old Age' and see if you agree. Thanks - Cheryl

David, I love the clever humour inserted here and there. Wonderful poem brought a smile to my chops and why not. I've got another two years and then I'm sixty four. Brilliant poem. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Such lovely feelings David. Funny how we think of things like that. I can remember when I was around 15, wondering what I would be like at 50. LOL If only I had know then what I know now! Great Poem. I loved the read.

Oh you are clever as well as a good writer.....You take the reader back to The Beatles and 'Will you still need me, when I'm sixty four'....Thinks that was the age in it as the tune runs through my mind....Or than there's the old one I'll love you forever when you're old and gray.....or better yet that book by Dr Seuss for children of all ages,1 to 100, 'I'll Love You Forever.' Perhaps the best book for all ages out there..Anyway, I transgress, sorry, but this is truly a wonderful poem. ~~~marci. :)

Splendid work here, David...Pristine structure...cascading flow...Clever versing FjR

great write & flow very enjoyable read really liked it mike fanniesson