Monday, May 30, 2016

When I'm Alone Comments

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When I'm alone I stare at the sky,
Then I reach for the moon with my hand,
If I could steal it for just one night,
Could I then make Heaven understand?
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 06 June 2016

Don't Talk Of Alone If you ever dare to steal the moon, To what will Andy Williams croon? Go from the helm, back to kitchen. For hotcakes, now, I'm almost itchin'. Lost at sea? You can call Coast Guard. (Make hotcakes with oil, not with lard!) Can you do with a finger, on which to linger? A comforting word? Don't you be absurd! Don't bother to greet dawn with a smile, But at least you should walk half a mile. I shall stand with you and feel the 1st stone, But after THAT you're on your own. Sorry. :)) bri

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Brian Johnston 31 May 2016

Still surfing the waves I see! Raw honesty in verse! A ten for that alone!

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