Sunday, August 27, 2017

When I Lost My Way Comments

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You are the candle
That lights my path in darkness
When I lost my way
The ray of light that shines through
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Bri Edwards 20 September 2019

i would think " lose" , not " lost" , to keep in line with previous present tens verbs. well, i'm glad you have enough light! ! ! ! may you have 'it' always! ! i usually just navigate with smoke alarm lights etc. or my cell phone when I get up to pee at night. and by the time i get up in the morning, it is light out(side) . :) bri p.s. does this have somethin' to do with LOVE? ? ?

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Bill Cantrell 27 August 2017

A poem of gratefulness, a path begins in morning, true poetry

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