Thursday, August 24, 2017

When I Look At You... Comments

Rating: 4.8

This prosaic world stops chattering the moment I look in your eyes...
The cacophony around gets numb and I feel the serene beauty being lost in the deep down ripples of your brimming shinny eyes...
The fragrance of your presence is like a precious present which makes me forget all the sadness...
The smile on your face is like a fresh morning dew signifying what sweetness is...
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Nishi Kumari
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Nishi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Beautiful poem.. Filled with love and promises

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