Saturday, July 26, 2014

When I Look At You Comments

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When I look at you
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When I look at you
I see in your face a sky
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 28 July 2014

beautiful imagery................like it sir

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Valsa George 27 July 2014

You have described the paragon of a real beauty or a beauty at least in your eyes! Wonderful description! Many a heart-shaped pendant Dropping down from ears Looking like pendant flowers On frail stems waver Through the breeze Of your delicate turn Great image!

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Bursting with beauty my friend!

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2014

infinite sky in smile, I like it, thanks,

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