When I’ll Die Comments

scroching pain...bful wrds... a 10 +

Pallavi, your concept was very good. But this poem needs some pruning and more clarity. First I thought this was like my poem MY DARK NIGHTS. But a little bit veered away. Keep writing. Good luck.

There would be many to cry... This world loves the Dead not the Alive... A beauttiful expression in a simple way...

Last line really says a lot about life