Thursday, May 1, 2014

When I'Ll Die Comments

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When i'll die,
you, stand by my side.
Close my eyes
with your hand,
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Kirti Sharma
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Gajanan Mishra 01 May 2014

let your love shower, thanks, good writing, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

An urdu poet says: - Aana to khafa aana, jana to rula jana, Aana bhi hay keya aana, jana bhi hay keya jana. If you mean the parting of your beloved is just like a death, it's a great poem

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