When I Let You In Comments

i let you in you lied and betyrad me.....................so i i did the same......awesome poem, my favorite part is when you wrote.....when i let you in, i loved you.more than the sun loves the moon, reallllyyyy goood toching love, annie

this is a good poem, but also a very good poem to read is 'Neil is awsome'

i really like this poem because i fully understand and feel it. its beautiful

When I Watched You Leave, I Broke, The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You. .......................the poetry lines still haunting my thoughts.... a poetry that catches the emotional you........Great job!

Poetry is about letting in. It is a poetry that deserves a credit and a crown. It is a 10.

a vivid picture.....lovely and touchy! 10+

Thanks, it got quite some people thinking, which I am glad.'

Emotional and thought provoking. Lovely.

: (....relationships hurt...that really sucks......the ones that you love most always seem to hurt you more. 10+

Thanks guys, I went for this sort of bizarre rhythm and all. But emotional as well. Thanks!

Wow I'm touched by your comments. I won't patch things up btw, he's probably harassing some other poor girl now. And I really do mean what i right, that's the beauty! Yup, he stole some stuff from me. Thanks!

Awww, poor thing Well written 10+ poem well expressed

Very heart felt and tru....if this happn to u guys patch things up....truly beautiful. DIMPLZ

When I Watched You Leave, I Broke, The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.... it is so painful dear. very good write