Recollecting the unforgettable moments
fragrance I still feel but the colors I have lost.
I remember a birthday party
enjoying the humors of your fourth birthday
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i'm thinking that My leap year baby, does NOT mean that the one with the February 29th birthday..........(Leap Year birthday; occurs on calendars only every four years) ...............was actually born to the speaker, though the speaker claims to ('now') be a mother and grandmother. (to be continued) ...
In my maiden life a virgin romance! ........maiden as in 'first' voyage, or as in 'maiden name'/last name of a woman before marriage? i'm a bit 'confused? ' over the gender of the speaker, for several reasons. i see Loke Kok Yee aka (to me) Bro has suggested that this poem will soften even MY heart! ! ! :) (to be continued) ......
Your poetry on love is ageless, love pours from your overflowing heart in all its beauty, and will soften even those with a heart of stone. Thank you sir.
Alas! I never knew that was a parting kiss! Now on 29th of February,2016 I am again dancing with you....an emotional write loaded with huge love....Loved your expression!
I see in you an eternal lover, ever green and fresh! Age hasn't done any damage to your love life! It is interesting to note that your sweet heart is a leap year baby! So you needn't blow many candles each year! ! Beautiful write!