Thursday, December 8, 2011

When I Have The Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

No word remains with me
Long enough to call my own
And as soon as it is repeated,
It is forever gone...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Hans Vr 15 December 2011

Romeo, this is a masterpiece. I really like the wisdom expressed. Even though things of beauty are transient, we can always hold the feather and the sweet memories of the latest wonderful thing may help us to bridge the gap to the next one. Fantastic write, I like it very. very much.

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Robert Beck 09 December 2011

I have reviewed this poem and many more................. Words from your heart read deep and true They flow from your hand sowing seeds of virtue

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

'tis a great poem! ! Fine and well-suited wording/ Top marks! !

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Crimson Love 08 December 2011

Truly stunning, and mind blowing lines. 'If it is my intention, I might strike the proper note And set the air quivering With a heart-ache's antidote...' Incredible write.

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Silentpoet Grl 08 December 2011

You are a beautiful writer - another wonderful poem. Great work!

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Bernard Snyder 08 December 2011

Very interesting Romeo! Not many people can word it in such a keen manner. But then, nothing surprises me anymore with you. You're AWESOME man!

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