Friday, September 12, 2008

When I Had A Crush On You Comments

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When I had a crush on you,
You acted as if I did not exist.
You persisted to avoid my advances.
Some of them were innocently delivered.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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This poem reminds me of my parents. ahaha! I like it. Keep writing! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Patricia Gale 12 September 2008

Maybe that why they call it a crush.... because it can crush the life out of you!

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Tia Maria 12 September 2008

Frightening - you just never know who you are really getting involved with until later years... but then there are some Frankensteins out there who may just create the monster. I am not having a dig at you my friend, I just had to share a funny thought :)

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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