Wednesday, February 1, 2006

When I Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd rather not be
a balloon on a string,
bobbing and nodding
silent agreements with the wind,
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Tara Crown
COMMENTS
Chuck Audette 28 April 2006

Another terrific poem I had somehow missed! I love the balloon description of bobbing and nodding silent agreements with the wind. Wonderful. -chuck

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Linda Hepner 16 February 2006

Another great poem, Tara L

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

Great thought. I really liked it.

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Ndidi Ubogu 01 February 2006

When i was reading your poem, actually i felt i had wings, because i was flying with your words. Sweet poem and good use of English. keep it up my friend

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Elya Thorn 01 February 2006

This is an amazing poem, you've made me feel weightless... ~~Elya Thorn~~

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