I'd rather not be
a balloon on a string,
bobbing and nodding
silent agreements with the wind,
...
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When i was reading your poem, actually i felt i had wings, because i was flying with your words. Sweet poem and good use of English. keep it up my friend
This is an amazing poem, you've made me feel weightless... ~~Elya Thorn~~
Another terrific poem I had somehow missed! I love the balloon description of bobbing and nodding silent agreements with the wind. Wonderful. -chuck