When I First Met You Comments

Reads very nicely and the repetition of “when I first met you..” works very well. Well done.

a very beautiful write with good repeatation [when I first met] which make the readers to stay focused on the theme of the poem and nicely woven rhymes [knew/blue] in short its a good write....thanks 10

First...met...these two words give this poem its meaning, that reminds us of a primordial dawn...God said to the prophet Jeremy, I think: 'I knew you before you were born'.

very well wrote thanks for sharing