Tuesday, June 19, 2012
When I Finally Shed This Body Comments
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When I finally shed this body,
I'll be light as a wisp of an angel,
Inviolate as a fairy's potent kiss,
Quick as the velvet wings of a moth.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
19 June 2012
Are you talking about the soul or the body or something else?
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Captain Cur
19 June 2012
Your words did a good job of shedding their body and creating the image. Great poem celebrating the spirit that inhabits us all.
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8/3/2025 3:06:50 AM # 1.0.0
I like the title very much. the poem makes me think of butterflies The choice of words give something magic The message is intriguing