Sunday, October 11, 2009

* When I Feel Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight i will forget my pains,
As snow is piled up all around,
and glittering in low moonlight,
Mists on windows of my house,
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Rafique Farooqi
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Lady Grace 06 December 2009

so entertaining to anyone's eyes....i like this piece...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2009

Sleep lures me to tranquillise, and the day comes during time, I am ready to move, Good morning, My soul. .one should avoid lonliness as it kills the person. but the fact remains that you hve to go alonein life//l; ovely poem....10 read mine.......you go alone

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Ejaz Khan 15 October 2009

A sad poem, portraying loneliness and yet ending is full of hope and a new beginning, where sunshine comes to fill the empty quarters of life, a beautiful write!

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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