When I Discovered Myself. Comments

Trembled my soul, And called for help, Again and again, The darkness of her moon, Made everything invisible, And no one could see, .until i landed in my own world....... a wonderful dream revealing so much about you. do u really want to grow like a mountain and become great. your desires and aspirations and all that may come between was in the poem i think, if my dream analysis is correct. wonderful poem. great imagination.. tony

Write comment. A great start, Zainab. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

HI, YOUR FLIGHT OF IMAGINATION IS LIKE FALCON HIGH ABOVE THE SKY. COUPLED YOUR EMPATHY FOR THE LESS PRIVILED AROUND DID IMPRESS ME.. YOU HAVE THE SPARKS WITHIN YOU TO SPREAD MESSAGE OF COMPASSION will go through your other poems as well and let you know of my impressions. God bless you, Take care. Allahafiz M chola

I love it.... Great start.... Keep courage.... Keep the pen in work..10... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night, depression you are killing me too.. Naila

A witty introspection elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful motivational piece of poetry penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Zainab and do remain enriched.

I came and sat, In front of the dusty mirror, Where I saw a stranger, Staring at me, .she has a world of her own, she stored evrything inside........ thank u dear poetess. tony

Welcome. An excellent insightful write. Well executed and expressed.+++10 If only we could discover ourselves. Our minds are electric-chemical neuronic synapsed factories that will not let us in. We may think we know who we are but do we? Who is in control? Is it you? The You of mind is the mind itself together with the physical brain controls us twenty-four-seven, all of life. Ask yourself do you walk or does your mind walk you?