When I Die... Comments

When I die I'd like to live your poem Joshua, achieve peace and freedom that life could not provide - C e r a s R a y n -

This sounds pretty romantic to me.

not bad but i'm not sure about some of the words like sepulchral urn, it kind of sounds a bit dated but nevertheless it's alright.

That was really good. .: : .Death drives people To do the impossible To talk to those Who can’t respond To cry over one Who cannot comfort To leave behind The life they knew.: : . -Dawn

'let me fly when i die'....such an intense plea... i liked this one... Asma...