When I Die Comments

frustrated mind has more dreams than a happy one! ! ! ! ! ! Good one! ! ! ! !

Wow+++ very nice poem. I love it Udaya R. Tennakoon

Nice pen, beautiful flow, intriguing, sad&sweet, loved it! ... Your poem reminds to beg for own end... It might bring the absolute freedom, how could I know? ...made me wonder if some of us are meant to be born into life's slavery rather than living slavery..Which ever is for me, I feel death is something to fear only for others, especially for dear ones.. Great joy to read your poem, I would love to do the same (except the middle finger lol) , thank you for share,10!