When I Dance........2 Comments

A beautiful poem. Loved the joyful expression. Top marks and to my favourite.

Let thy dance come here on the heavenly earth to merge everything in the rapturous spiritual sense.........

jab main naachti hoon rung barangi phool dekhti hoon mahaan prakirti ki khoobsoorti dekhti hoon aur mera jeevan rung-barangi ho jaata hai

Performing arts such as dance draw their inspiration from human feelings and emotions and also from myriad colours offered by a bountiful nature all around us. You have nicely illustrated this through flowers and bright colours. This is part of a larger divine game-plan. Thanks for the poem with a philosophical touch: It does not matter where you come from - All that matters is where you are heading towards -

When our talent and.passion is put into action we feel the sense of fulfillment and everything flows; happiness, contentment, pride, peace and everything that surrounds us seems beautiful. A wonderful poem beautifully conveyed. Liked the ultimate stanza.

Beauty is thy inspiration Oh! dancer poet. How strongly you impress the readers with the description of each kind of flower that charm with the beauty and purity. Thanks a lot for sharing....10

Wow. A pictorial description of the dancing art has never tasted better. What a way to see the act of dancing! This poem really portarys the poetess' collected insight into certain natural events and things. She, the poetess, has through her poetic and literary prowess been able to present to us another unrivalled way of picturing the dancing art. This is so impressive, dear poetess. Thank you.

A brilliant expression you have made dear madam, I feel as if the flowers like radiant rose, ravishing hibiscus, laburnum flowers, yellow sunflowers, bright pink delightful Dahlia, pink bougainvillaea are dancing together with you. Here you too have delineated brilliantly about a spiritual flower which you like most is Lotus taking a lofty theme.Thank you dear Dr, Geeta ji for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Full vote.

Dancing as a way to find connection with nature.Excellent as always